sábado, janeiro 17, 2009

Practicing Writing - Topic One

Agreement and Disagreeement - A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.


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  1. Nowadays, some people may hold the opinion that building a factory near their community could be a good thing, since it may take down the rate of unemployment and became a major resource of income for the whole community as well. Other people have a different opinion. They argue that the damages caused by the factory would be more intense than the benefits. For example, those people say that the waste thrown into the air and the good water would be a big problem, maybe irreversible, if the company does not have a serious and responsible plan of protection for the environment.

    My opinions about that topic are still confused. There are good arguments in both sides. For example, I do agree that the progress process could really be accelerated by setting up a factory in the nearby, for obvious reasons. But on the other hand, I take in account that setting up a factory could bring troubles as well. Unwanted phenomena could come along with the progress. We may lose our peace for the noise and pollution released by the factory; animals could leave the region because of the waste thrown into the water and so on.

    What is clear after all is that the quick progress has a high price. The point is: Are we willing to pay for it?

    by manuela Alves

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  2. Anônimo3:46 PM

    Some people support to build a factory near our community, other decided to oppose it. Nowadays some my hold that opinion that a new factory near our community helps to improve living standard of people in our community and it will bring prosperity to our community, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I concerned, I agree that build a factory near our community is an excellent idea. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

    One of the primary causes is that the factory will employ a lot of workers. As a consequence, the unemployment rate will drop significantly. Another advantage about this the tax collected will also be increased. The town will be able to spend more money on infrastructures and other development like the development of other business such as shops, theatres and restaurants. Furthermore, the products the factory manufactures will improve our quality of living.

    But there is a further more subtle point we must consider. There are some disadvantages building a factory here. First, it will disturb the quiescence of our community. A lot of people will rush into our community due to the factory, and the road will get crowded, it will be very noisy and unsafe for our children who always play freely in the streets before. What is more, the factory will produce many waste products each day, and there will be much waste water coming out from the factory and it will pollute the our rivers, including poisonous gas and liquid harming the air too.

    General speaking, set up a factory in our community is a great way of development, in spite of advantages and disadvantages. Recognizing the fact that modern technologies have made today’s factories technology intensive and brought pollutions to the minimum should drive us to conclude that is possible get progress without harming the environment like in old times.

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  3. Agreement and Disagreement

    Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that would be good to build a factory in our city, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that factory many things would happen some things good others bad. My arguments for this point are listed as fallows.

    I agree with the statement that a new factory will bring prosperity to our community, the tax colleted from a factory is a important source to the town will be able to spend more money on infrastructure and other development; by the way I agree without since that factory doesn’t bring smog and pollution, and destroy the quality of the air and water in town. However, I believe that modern technologies have made today’s factories technology intensive and brought pollution to the minimum. Furthermore, we should understand that society needs to evolve and we cannot always stay in the old time.

    Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believed that it can provide more jobs for us, especially for the young people in our community, it will help to develop our area.

    In a word we can to say how it’s important to our town: necessity.

    Taking into account to all these factors we may reach the conclusion that have the pros and cons, but it’s common knowledge. The factory will be important to development to our town.

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  4. Nowadays, some may support the idea that building a factory near our community can helps to improve living standard of people and to drop the unemployment rate. It will also give a good chance for the development of other business in our community such as shops, theatres and restaurants. The quality of life will improve significantly.

    However, others have a negative attitude. They believe that building a factory will harm our environment. The factory produces a lot of waste that it will be thrown away into our rivers. The air will be polluted by poisonous gases. In consequence, our health will be seriously affected. Another disadvantage: it will disturb the quiescence of our community.

    Of course, there are some advantages and disadvantages in building a factory in our community. I support the idea that it must be done. My arguments for this point are listed as follows:

    First, it will increase job’s opportunity. For example: a Hydro plant, that it will be built in Porto Velho – Rondônia, is expected to employ 15,000 of people. In doing so, people will improve their quality of life, that it means a better education for their sons. It’s all a matter of opportunity.

    Second, protecting environment organizations do not permit the people to fish or to hunt. What can they do if they can not fish or hunt? Either they will go hungry or they will look for something “easer”.

    Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that we need to progress, even it could affect our daily life.

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  5. Advantages and Disadvantages

    We will discuss some advantages and disadvantages about the construction of a factory near a community; we will take as base four texts that they talk about the same subject but with different visions.

    The advantages that we can notice in elapsing of the texts are that, through the construction of the factory many jobs they appeared for the community's residents, in that way there will be a very high economical development. The technology will be the more possible assault so that the residents of the roundness don't come suffers any type of harms.

    Some disadvantages will also appear with the construction of that factory, one of them is the pollution of the air, even with modern machines that you/they purify the air know that the residents are not protected totally of the risk of catching some diseases. The people that also earn a living also through the cultivation of foods prejudiced seram, due to dust produced by the intense traffic of trucks. We cannot also forget about the pollution of the rivers, where the fish died and people will acquire serious diseases.

    As what was presented, I agree with the non construction of the factory, because constructions of that level should not be made close of any place where have people living. I think that even the factory being built distant of the community, she will offer many jobs without causing risks to the residents.

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  6. Nowadays, some way hold the opinion that builds a new factory near their community is a good thing and support the idea. Of course, building a factory has advantages and disadvantages.

    There are some advantages, for example, it can provides more job opportunities and many people may work in the factory, it is a good chance for the development of other business in our community such as shops and restaurants.
    But, of course, building a factory has disadvantages as disturb the quiescence of our community, pollution, etc.

    In my opinion, the benefits outweigh the dangers, so I support the idea.

    by Gleiciane Andrade

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  7. Anônimo4:18 PM

    Agreement and Disagreement – Practicing Writing

    Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that the build a factory is a very important and necessary to development of the little city. But others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that a factory will bring the progress and news opportunities for residents. It will increase the workers’ income and it will give chances to other business as shops, restaurants and theatres. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

    I agree with the statement that says a new factory will bring prosperity to the community without reservations since that happens of beneficial manner doesn’t prejudicing anybody.

    Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that will improve living standard of people offering more job opportunities especially for the young people. And also because if to increase the people’s income, they will be able to spend more money on food, clothing and leisure time, and the quality of life will be increased. With the tax collected from a factory will can to spend more money on infrastructures and gives a good chance for the development of other business in the community like shops, theatres and restaurants. As consequence this occur the town’s growth.

    In a word, the town’s growth depend on factory. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that this build is really very necessary to do the town to increase and to decrease the unemployment number.Furthermore, the factory can help in social project in community, and with the tax collected can to spend more money on infrastructures.

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  8. Anônimo4:20 PM

    Agreement and Disagreement - Practicing Writing

    Some people prefer the building a factory near our community, other believe that would bring smog and pollution.

    Nowadays some my hold the opinion that building a Factory will bring a lot of increases to our community, but others have a negative attitude.As far as I am concerned, I agree that building a factory, but have to protect the enviroment and essentialy the living of the workers and our community.

    My arguments for this point arre listed as follows:

    One of the primary causes is that will more job opportunities.
    Second many people will may working in the factory, futher more, more jobs especially for the young people in the our community.

    But there is a futher more subtle point we must consider as:

    1. Build the factory in a safe distance from our community, not too near;

    2. Make sure that the factory can deal with the waste properly. Do not release the poisonous gas into the air, and not release the waste water into the river nearby.
    3.Make sure the security guard in the factory works very well.

    What is more with the building a factory in our community, it also gives a good chace for the development of other business in our community such as shops, theatres and restaurants.

    General speaking, building a factory near our community is a good news to as. Recognizing the fact that could bring any unsafe for any people should drive us to conclude that we have that look at in the future and don't come back

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  9. Agreement and Disagreement
    Nowadays, some way hold the opinion that build a new factory near their community is a good thing and support the idea. That people believe that build one will bring beneficts to community, and they outweigh the possible negative consequencies as smog, pollution and noise. They understand that society needs to envolve and they cannot always stay in the old time.
    Nevertheless, others have a negative atitude. They believe that the factory will change to community’s style of life, besides smog, pollution and noise. For them, all this things will affect people’s health and the progress does not pay the price.
    As far as I am concerned, I agree with building of factory. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. I agree with the statement that this will bring beneficts to near community and will increase of the people’s quality of life, without reservations since the factory is built in a safe distance from community. This way, the smog, pollution and noise will not affect the people’s health. Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that people must try to live the possible better way, seeking to increase in all areas of their lifes. This include to live in a place where the youngs, for example, can have perspectives in their lifes and oportunities to accomplish their dreams. For this, we must be receptable to changes and to make good use of oportunities when they appear, and the factory is a good one.
    In a word, I support the idea. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that to build a factory near community is a good news and it will be good to community.

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  10. Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that to build a large factory near our community is good because believe that the advantages are more important than disadvantages. A factory helps to improve living standard of people, employ a lot of workers and bring prosperity to our community. But others have a negative attitude.

    As far as I am concerned I agree that to build a large factory near a community is a very good idea, because I believe that the advantages is more better than the disadvantages. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

    I agree with the statement that to build this kind of factory can provide more jobs essencialy for the young and unemployed people. Without reservations since these factories not quite harmful the environment, no affect the daily life of people, don´t produce a lot of waste, for example, poisonous gas and liquid.

    Another reason Why I agree with the above statement is believe that today, moderns technologies can produce a minimum pollution and this kind of factory can help in socials projects and bring new business as restaurants, hotels, hospitals, etc.

    In a word, to build factories in nowadays is necessary because bring us more prosperity and more business opportunities.

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